Sunday, September 27, 2009
Sketch
The intense peddles, the bike, burning rubber as it cruises around the town. As fast as lightning and as smooth as butter it soars to its destination. The wind blowing in your hair with sparks flying behind you! Riding it is like jumping on a new mountain bike. Its blue wicker basket helping you carry things that can't be held, and the horn on the handle bar chiming loudly. The tires spinning along the pavement and the breeze and fresh air rushing towards your face.
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I thought the word choice was very effective. The flow of it was good and it was easy to see the visual you were trying to show.
ReplyDeleteI could easily picture a bike in my head while reading this! Good job!
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