Sunday, September 20, 2009

Dialoge

Passenger: "Crazy night!"

Driver: "What's the suppose to mean?"

Passenger: "You have to admit, It really didn't go as well as we had planned."

Driver: "Well how was I suppose to know it would turn into a steady downpour, when I checked, the forecast said mid 70's and clear skies."

Passenger: "Well I didn't even want to come in the first place, you know camping is not my thing! I hate it, ever since the moose incident, I promised myself never again and look what happened. No tent, The food went bad, I'm covered in bumps, and I'm soaking wet!"

Driver: "I'm sorry I lost the instructions for the tent, who would have thought the ice would melt so fast and ruin all the food, and I could have sworn I packed the bug spray."

Passenger: "I know, I know I guess you did try. Well know we have a good story to tell the kids."

Driver: "That's the girl I know, always looking on the bright side!"

Passenger: "Next time were staying at a hotel!"

Driver: "We'll see."

4 comments:

  1. Definitely interesting. I love the end. I just wanted it to keep going. Good idea for sure.

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  2. I like it but it seemed short. fits the setting realisticly

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  3. Funny. I'd like to get to know these characters more.

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  4. i think there talking for to long. shorter sentances. but its still good.

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